Shortly after dawn the next day, Arjuna and Karna wheeled their chariots onto the chosen field of battle. No words were shared by the two before the fighting began. Arjuna was a skilled archer, using his bow to keep Karna constantly moving. Karna used his superior charioteer to make quick attacks on Arjuna, leaving Arjuna off balance and frustrated as the battle went on. As the fighting continued, Karna struck a glancing blow Arjuna, shattering his bow. Arjuna called for a moment of peace, so that he may retrieve another bow. Arjuna declared that it was the honorable thing to do, that Karna killing him now would be no real victory. However, Karna was blinded by rage and pressed his advantage over Arjuna, continuing to attack the now defenseless chariot. Gathering all his strength to him, Arjuna managed to repair his bow, and the fight continued like this for hours.
Around noon, the wheel of Karna's chariot became stuck in a rut that had been carved in the muddy field. Karna, knowing that standing still Arjuna would kill him with no effort, called for a respite. Krishna, who had been watching the battle, encouraged Arjuna to not grant the respite to Karna. Arjuna decided to grant it, deciding that he would win the day and win it with his honor intact. Karna freed his chariot, and the fight continued.
Arjuna and Karna, courtesy of Read Kushal |
Author's Note: My story is based on the story of the fight between Arjuna and Karna in The Five Tall Sons of Pandu. In their fight, Arjuna breaks his bow and asks for a respite to retrieve another, which Karna does not grant. Karna's chariot wheel later gets stuck, and Arjuna does not give him a respite at Krishna's behest. Arjuna then kills Karna. I thought it would make for an interesting story if Arjuna granted Karna his respite, and then Karna continued to win the battle. This would lose the war for the Pandavas and send them back into exile.
Bibliography: "The Five Tall Sons of Pandu" by Richard Wilson. Link.
Hi Andrew,
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading you retell story of Pandavas brothers. It was interesting how you focused on Arjun’s character and based on original Mahabharata, Arjun was given a lot of importance. So, that was great you focused on his character and you pointed out Karna’s character as well. Good read. I am looking forward to read more of your reading blog.
Hi Andrew! I like the way you drastically changed the original story so that Karna has the upper hand in the battle. I think that if this happened in The Mahabharata there would be a lot of changes in the overall plot of the story. I also liked the picture of Arjuna and Karna's battle. It added to your story.
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Hi Andrew! Great job on your story. I thought it flowed very nicely, and it was easy to read from start to finish. I like the small changes that you altered from the original story to keep the reader guessing what was going to happen throughout the story because it was going exactly the same as the original story. Great job and thanks for sharing!
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