Hanuman sneered and exhaled sharply, as if remembering a joke.
"So this guy Bhima gets all bent out of shape. He keeps asking me to recount my experience with Rama and reveal my true form and things like that. I decided that I didn't have anything else to do that day, so I start telling him the story of Rama. Not Rama the legendary embodiment of a God, but the cowardly and incompetent man. I told Bhima that Rama coming into my life was the worst thing that ever happened to me. Now, poor old Bhima looked pretty put down by the whole thing. I almost felt bad, and then I remembered how satisfied I was each time I told the truth about Rama to one of the naive people who believed in him".
Hanuman smiled to himself and then continued speaking.
"Still, this guy Bhima looked like he was broken. Big and strong guy like that, I figured his emotions would be rock solid. I was in a good mood after my nap in the sun, so I figured I could cheer this guy up. I balloon up to my true form, you know the one I use for moving mountains? Yah, that one. Bhima looked a little bit more cheerful after I did that. Bhima finally told me that he was also a son of Vayu. That one threw me for a loop. Who knew that poor old me would have a brother one day. I should start going to the annual family reunion".
Hanuman and Bhima, courtesy of KidsGen |
Hanuman now looked like he was almost happy, like all his grievances with humanity and the Gods were forgotten.
"Bhima then said he had to be on his way, something about collecting lotuses for a Draupadi. I legitimately wished the guy well, after all he was my brother. I also hoped that he would remember the truth about that phony Rama, and tell everyone what he learned from me that day".
Author's Note: I have previously written a story about my favorite character from the Ramayana, Hanuman. He appeared again in the Mahabharata and I decided to do a follow up to my grumpy version of Hanuman when he is encountered in the Mahabharata. I figured I would have Hanuman give his version of the meeting with Bhima, his brother. This story is again written as Hanuman telling a silent audience a story about his life.
Bibliography:
"Mahabharata: Public Domain Edition" by Multiple Authors, link.
"Ramayana: Public Domain Edition" by Multiple Authors, link.
Great story Andrew!
ReplyDeleteIt was a very creative idea to expand on where the characters are now. I don't know if it is true or fiction, but I like how Bhima and Hanuman were brothers, and meeting was a course of fate (maybe?). The picture selected of Bhima and Hanuman fits perfectly with the story you have portrayed.
Thanks for the great read, I look forward to more!
It never even occurred to me that Hanuman and Bhima were brothers! Wow, what an eye-opener.
ReplyDeleteAnyways, hello again Andrew. I think we were in the same group during the first week. Good to see you again. I can already say that I've noticed a massive improvement in your writing. Keep it up!
But that is not to say there aren't area you could improve on. My biggest issue here is the tense. Hanuman seems to be telling the story directly to the reader, but then every once in a while all of a sudden a narrator comes in and tells us what Hanuman is doing? These lines were all very confusing and (mostly) unnecessary; I would simply cut them out.